Eternal Happiness

by Rupradha Mookerjee

I was quiet even in the throng,

Something was surely wrong,

I missed you baby, like hell,

Still couldn’t send you a mail,

I became a drooping rose,

Without you my veins froze,

Often my eyes used to be wet,

Couldn’t believe in my fate,

Thought I would never smile again,

Till you took away all my pain.

Baby, your single call,

Could bring it all,

I smiled with the same grace,

Without you my life was a mess,

I am back to life at present,

You made my world so pleasant,

I am now filled with sassiness,

You’ve become my eternal happiness,

With every passing year I love you more,

Never loved anybody so much before!

16-Apr-2012

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Comments on this Poem

Reappearance of your poems shows the richness of your poetry.Really your poems have some special qualities. I can't describe . Howmuch people liked them,you can easily imagine it.Thank you so much for your love poems & salute to your penance of love.

Nathmal Sharma
16-May-2013 09:21 AM

Thanks a lot Kumarendra Ji. "I missed you baby, like hell" means "I terribly missed you"..I would like to keep it as it is. Thanks again.

rupradhamookerjee
25-Apr-2012 15:14 PM

I am happy with your poem with a strong longing and yearning. The composition is good, except one word 'hell'. Please find an alternate word. Love and thank you.

Kumarendra Mallick
24-Apr-2012 23:12 PM

thanks a lot Prof & Kanchan Ji!!

rupradhamookerjee
24-Apr-2012 10:14 AM

Yearning and the rewards of yearning are both beautiful!

Kanchan Bhattacharya
17-Apr-2012 04:25 AM

Wow! Wonderful !

You’ve become my eternal happiness,
With every passing year I love you more,
Never loved anybody so much before!

These lines carry everything in your heart.

flame
16-Apr-2012 09:55 AM