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Theme: Care

First Steps
by Debalina Roychowdhury
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It's all about the way you walked by my side.
It's all about the way the sun shined;
It's all about the happy stream that passes by
The rocks, the pebbles and time.
 
It made the sun rise in its brightest way
It made the rivulet sing;
It made my eyes wet which stole
Colours from the linnet's wing.

It was because you smiled sweet
It was because you caressed;
That was your first innocent step,
It was all I deeply cared.
Image © Debalina Roychowdhury

14-Jun-2012

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Comments on this Poem

Comment truly awesome didi.....d profound feeling of a mom!!!!!!!!!!!!

madhumita roy chowdhury
24-Jun-2012 06:23 AM
Comment every word is as delicate and sincere as are your emotions. carry on.

sharmistha chatterjee
19-Jun-2012 04:54 AM
Comment thank u all.this is my one year old 'Sun'

drishanblog
15-Jun-2012 14:35 PM
Comment Cute child, beautiful poem!

Kanchan Bhattacharya
15-Jun-2012 13:37 PM
Comment so beautifully written!!

Rupradha
15-Jun-2012 06:39 AM
Comment

Nice poem

flame
15-Jun-2012 06:23 AM
Comment Debalina, you have composed a very delicate poem with lot of emotions. Every line is wonderful. Thank you, dear.

Kumarendra Mallick
14-Jun-2012 12:05 PM

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