The Dance Floor

by Rupradha Mookerjee

Last night when I danced

And rocked the dance floor

There was passion, energy,

Excitement, a teenager’s feelings,

And an unbound desire

To wash away my solitude,

The sizzling bar, the young crowd,

The grooving with the rhythm,

Everything was magical,

Foggy yet tantalizing,

But with every dance step,

All I wanted was you.

Something was missing,

Yes, it was only you;

Wish I could dance with you,

Like the couples danced,

In an enticing way,

Holding each other in arms,

Wish I could kiss you

Like the couples did,

Sitting on the couch

And making out,

It made me lonely again

And I missed you like hell!

11-Aug-2012

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Comments on this Poem

KumarJi & Prof, I am glad you liked it!! thanks a lot..your words always motivate me..

rupradhamookerjee
13-Aug-2012 01:24 AM

There is every bit of emotion in your poem, Rupradha - yearning and longing, hope and aspiration, dream and awakening! Lovely poem. Thank you, dear for sharing.

Kumarendra Mallick
12-Aug-2012 23:24 PM

Radha Ji after a long gap you brought jubilant dance for us . Very energetic poem with a tinge of personal grief. Keep writing ,please.

flame
12-Aug-2012 14:20 PM

I appreciate your thoughts Sharbaaniranjan Ji. Thanks a lot. Missing somebody is a state of mind and an emotional feeling and that don't make me Abalaa.. :) My love don't seek pity, it's divine and unconditional..

rupradhamookerjee
12-Aug-2012 11:06 AM

Despite your sentiments, I would you rather be like the ballerina in the Getty image coming with your poem, instead of missing a somebody. Be the ballerina of the picture. If you missed somebody, I would rather you be Ardhanariswar! Do not be ABALAA.

Sharbaaniranjan Kundu
12-Aug-2012 06:22 AM

Thanks a lot BharatJi..yes, it is indeed worship for me..

rupradhamookerjee
11-Aug-2012 23:20 PM

Thank you so much KulbirJi!! May God bless you too..

rupradhamookerjee
11-Aug-2012 23:19 PM

Welcome!! Your missing someone with such an intense way transforms "The Missing:" into a Worship. Just GREAT !!

raghav
11-Aug-2012 22:32 PM

Welcome back!

What a gift for us!

May you be blessed!

Kulbir
11-Aug-2012 20:15 PM