Till We Die

by Dr. Jaipal Singh

The days and years
Of our lives
Are passing away
Slowly but surely...

So let's try
To make ourselves
Better each moment
Till we die.

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Comments on this Poem

Thanks Rupradha Ji, for review as ever.

jairathore
24-Aug-2012 00:36 AM

Thank you, Kingshuk Ji, if we act the way we talk or feel, it certainly has better impact on many to follow...

jairathore
24-Aug-2012 00:34 AM

excellent..

Rupradha
23-Aug-2012 14:42 PM

Nice! Think along your line and feel, let us try to be 'a bit more human' .............. Liked it.

Kingshuk
23-Aug-2012 08:20 AM

Glad you did it!

jairathore
23-Aug-2012 07:57 AM

Resolved!

kulbirbhalla
23-Aug-2012 07:52 AM