Spring sky,
Cranes fly,
Bonsai,
Mind’s eye,
In the dawn of spring sky, cranes flyway
In my path of bonsai, mind’s eye day!
~*~
Tyburn Pattern:
Lines 1 to 4 - 2 Syllables, Rhythm a.
Lines 5 & 6 - 9 Syllables, Rhythm b.
Lines 1 & 2 should be Syllables 5 to 8 of Line 5.
Lines 3 & 4 should be Syllables 5 to 8 of Line 6.
