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Wait
by Dr. Jaipal Singh
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Was it your subtle charm
Was it your serene demeanour
Or a combination of the two
That caused the magical spell?
A blinded and mesmerized me
To follow your footprints
In an unquenchable thirst
For the rest of the life...

No passion or romance in sight
Yet I continue to long for you
None else could fill the void
Which was so caused by you
Whether you come or not
During this listless life
Until my last breath
I shall wait for you.
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02-Oct-2012

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Comments on this Poem

Comment Thank you.

jairathore
10-Nov-2012 08:19 AM
Comment Excellent!

MPSingh
17-Oct-2012 08:02 AM
Comment Grateful for your genuine concern and feelings!

jairathore
08-Oct-2012 03:11 AM
Comment May your words give you wings to fulfill your longing!

Kulbir
05-Oct-2012 16:41 PM
Comment Rendered speechless, Rupradhaji, I don't know what to say. Thanks anyway, I shall remember kind words..

jairathore
04-Oct-2012 12:41 PM
Comment this is too good..God, Jaipal Ji, you are really great!!

Rupradha
04-Oct-2012 04:44 AM
Comment Thanks a lot!

jairathore
04-Oct-2012 00:19 AM
Comment Beautiful!

kingshuk
02-Oct-2012 04:31 AM

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