Theme: Surrender

You and I

You came and just swayed my mind
The way the cloud of Nor’wester takes over the sky.
The way the earth is shaken by the whirlwind,
And the downpour washes away all that come by.

Like a mere existence in that flow, fully entwined,
Dancing on your tune in a complete submission, there was I.

Even after you are gone, you remain...
Like the dominance of storm felt in bowed down world
Like the lush green fields scream after the rain,
And the melody of dripping water entices a heart unfurled,
Like an ecstatic heart's dreams, the field is filled with grains.
In the joy of harvest, the blooming hopes swirled.

02-Oct-2012

More By  :  Kingshuk Chakraborty

Views: 1495     Comments: 3

Comments on this Poem

Comment I am honoured!! thank you so much!!

Rupradha
04-Oct-2012 04:43 AM

Comment Thank you, Rupradha ji. I am a silent admirer of your works. Appreciation from you means a lot.

kingshuk
03-Oct-2012 10:21 AM

Comment beautiful..

Rupradha
03-Oct-2012 04:46 AM


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