Awakening

by Dr. Kumarendra Mallick

Lotus stem –

creates ripples in the pool

of my heart

Meditation –

child’s play of ‘statue’

between two thoughts

Mahatma Gandhi –

he rides to sunset leaving

a trail of light

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04-Oct-2012

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Comments on this Poem

Thank you, Gopal for your appreciation.

Kumarendra Mallick
13-Dec-2015 12:10 PM

Deeply moving

gopal
12-Dec-2015 07:57 AM

Hema, you are very witty in your response. Say once more 'statue' so that I can move to give my reply! I am very glad you liked the short verses.

kumarendramallick
06-Oct-2012 12:14 PM

Your verse has created ripples in my heart,remain statue there following the lighted trail....Superb verse, Sir, thanks for sharing.

hema
06-Oct-2012 04:59 AM

Dear Lovita, if our heart can make love bloom in another, it can make a lotus blossom, too. You are vey right while appreciating the verse. Thank you.

kumarendramallick
05-Oct-2012 14:08 PM

Lotus that you can make bloom...

lovita J R Morang
04-Oct-2012 23:24 PM

Very right, Ajay. The spirit of love and the spirit of adventure make all the difference. Thank you, dear friend.

kumarendramallick
04-Oct-2012 23:02 PM

Thank you, Rupradha. You push a sun onto my dawn by your constant appreciation. It is such a pleasure to have yo as a friend.

kumarendramallick
04-Oct-2012 23:00 PM

great one!! loved it!!

Rupradha
04-Oct-2012 14:40 PM

An youthful exuberance we feel when starting out on a new adventure or taking a journey of faith..........

Ajay Gajaria
04-Oct-2012 13:47 PM

Thank you, Bhanu for liking all the three verses. I feel happy.

Kumarendra Mallick
04-Oct-2012 13:42 PM

Thank you, Anna. It is referring to the moment of stillness between two thoughts. While reading on meditation I gathered this idea.

Kumarendra Mallick
04-Oct-2012 13:39 PM

All the three are awesome....the best pertaining the theme :-) kudo's sir....

Vijaya Bhanu Kote
04-Oct-2012 13:23 PM

lovely.. i loved th esecond one best..something different and cool.. Meditation –
child’s play of ‘statue’
between two thoughts

anna maria
04-Oct-2012 13:11 PM