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Theme: Love

Naiveté

by Rajender Krishan

Twinkling eyes
showing hidden passion
Throbbing lips
eager to articulate tacit gestures
Emotions oozing
through the moistness
of glittering teardrops…
Blushing beauty
gloriously deified

Ah!
These inviting expressions
defining Love
as the only universal language
encourage me
to share my poesy
in tranquil unison
each time
I knock your door

18-Oct-2012

More By : Rajender Krishan

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Comments on this Poem

"of glittering teardrops…" - Maybe a little jarring
In the sensuous setting.

BS Murthy
20-Dec-2012 06:04 AM

Universal expression needs no words.Heavenly feeling it radiates is enough.

T.S.Chandra Mouli
20-Oct-2012 12:45 PM

Mute signs!

Pavalamani Pragasam
20-Oct-2012 10:28 AM

I am running short of words to praise these lines. Wonderful poem.

V.K. Joshi
20-Oct-2012 09:51 AM

A stand-out poem!

sunilsharma
20-Oct-2012 09:50 AM

The title could be 'Knock at the Door'. It is a fantastic concept of love glittering with teardrops....

Dr.Ratan Bhattacharjee
20-Oct-2012 09:35 AM

Aptly titled and well articulated glorifying naïve love.

versetile
19-Oct-2012 10:38 AM