Beyond My Control

by Dr. Jaipal Singh



Sometimes I have this feeling We were destined to meet for sure A bond of friendship was by choice But loving you so madly during life, Was beyond my control or imagination. Sometimes I have this feeling Giving and receiving affection and care Gave a lot of strength and courage But consequent longing for you lifelong, Was beyond my control or imagination. Sometimes I have this feeling You were destined to part and go away Leaving behind memories anyway But the resultant suffering and pain, Was beyond my control or imagination.

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24-Feb-2013

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Comments on this Poem

Dear kulbir Ji,

On the contrary, I really liked your quatrain...

And you have every right, and in fact welcome, to even criticize or point out shortcomings, if any, in my writings.

Regards,
Jaipal

jairathore
26-Feb-2013 23:16 PM

Dear Jai Sahib,

Your poem was perfecto to start with - who am I to finish it?

Please don't mind the verse I wrote - it just came to me.

Thanks!

Kulbir
26-Feb-2013 16:39 PM

Thank you so much, Rupradha Ji, for liking it.

jairathore
26-Feb-2013 08:50 AM

Thank you so much, Kulbir Ji, for completing my incomplete poem...!

jairathore
26-Feb-2013 08:49 AM

awesome Jai Ji!

Rupradha
26-Feb-2013 06:19 AM

Sometimes I have this feeling
Your love is healing
Everything wrong with me,
If you could see...

kulbirbhalla
24-Feb-2013 11:27 AM