I Still Care

by Kulbir Bhalla

In daylight, you can't see
The stars are still there;
Though you forget Me,
For you, I still care.

28-Apr-2013

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Comments on this Poem

Nathmalji,

My gratitude for your appreciation.

Kulbir
07-Oct-2013 15:34 PM

God still care of all even they know or not know about Him.Thanks for your poem becoming editor's choice.

Nathmal Sharma
07-Oct-2013 14:03 PM

We are all God's children.He always care his children though they remember or forget Him.God is full of omnibenevolence.Here you have depicted that quality of God.A lot thanks concerning God like that in your poem.

Nathmal Sharma
01-May-2013 07:54 AM

Dear Kulbir Ji,

I appreciate all your poetic endeavours but the ones I mark as Ed's Choice - they are my Favs :-)

alwaysaparna
30-Apr-2013 09:23 AM

mind blowing..

Rupradha
30-Apr-2013 01:21 AM

A nice quatrain!

jairathore
29-Apr-2013 10:04 AM

Aparnaji and Padmajaji,
My gratitude for your appreciation.

Kulbir
29-Apr-2013 07:55 AM

Lovely! A very nuanced poem!

Padmaja Iyengar
29-Apr-2013 02:45 AM