Don't You See?

by Kulbir Bhalla

Don't look at me!
With your glance
You start romance:
Don't you see?

08-Jun-2013

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Comments on this Poem

What did you think to do the next ? Kulbir Ji. ( I mean about writing.)

Nathmal Sharma
11-Jun-2013 14:31 PM

Padmaja,

My thanks for finding it romantic.

kulbirbhalla
10-Jun-2013 18:15 PM

Very romantic! This one reminds me of a song from Dev Anand's "Teen Deviyaan" - Aise toh na dekho...(Mohd. Rafi)

Padmaja Iyengar
10-Jun-2013 15:56 PM

Nathmalji & Rupradhaji,
Thank you so much for your appreciation.

kulbirbhalla
09-Jun-2013 08:07 AM

very nice..

Rupradha
09-Jun-2013 03:32 AM

Be aware of penetrating eyes,Kulbir Ji.You will not be able to know and they will across your heart.Because God has made them to attract someone and
create new generation."Bachke rahna re baba,bachke rahna re".I think,You are very smart in this matter.What can I say any more ? Thank you.

Nathmal Sharma
08-Jun-2013 22:28 PM