Monsoon Love

by Kingshuk Chakraborty

Drenched…
Ma was holding her umbrella above me
She was in rain and I was in her love.

05-Jul-2013

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Comments on this Poem

Thank you, Madhaviji.................yes, she was always a fountain of love!

kingshuk
11-Jul-2013 01:23 AM

Just lovely...as lovely as a mother is. Thank you for a nice poem.

madhavi
10-Jul-2013 08:14 AM

Thank you so much, Sir.........Loved to have your suggestions.

Could have been....

Drenched....
Holding her umbrella above
Ma was in rain, I was in her love.

kingshuk
06-Jul-2013 07:27 AM

Thank you so much, Padmaja...........look forward to your review always. Hope you have read RHYTHMS DO WONDER.

kingshuk
06-Jul-2013 00:09 AM

Exquisite thought!

Padmaja Iyengar
05-Jul-2013 23:46 PM

Thank you so much, Rupradhaji. Happy to know that you liked it.

kingshuk
05-Jul-2013 23:27 PM

Good one, KIngshuk. Please make the poem more crisp by deleting extra words.

Kumarendra Mallick
05-Jul-2013 22:39 PM

so touchy!! beautiful!!

rupradha mookerjee
05-Jul-2013 13:27 PM