Nathmalji, Your appreciation is very much appreciated. I am so glad you found it to your liking.
kulbirbhalla 11-Jul-2013 20:25 PM
People call you Kulbir but Are you Kulbir ?They address your living body Kulbir.But you are not Kulbir.You are also not a body.You are a "shudh aatama".You have held the body to experience your good & bad karmas.You are a proportion of God."Aatamsaksatkar" is self realization.It is a process to meet God & free from birth, rebirth and death,as our religious books tell. Saints & sages also support this theory.In this poem you have depicted the sense of invisible aatama.It is a sign of very high thinking.Thank you very much for expressing deep thoughts about soul.Really you are a great person of modernity & spiritualization.A lot of thanks again.I liked the poem.