Om

by Rajender Krishan

Om
Primordial energy
The sound of silence

Om
The Only Verse
Manifesting eternally
The Universe

Illustration by Niloufer Wadia

21-Jul-2013

More By : Rajender Krishan

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Comments on this Poem

Thanks to everyone for their lovely comments.
Om Tat Sat.

Raj
23-Jul-2013 07:26 AM

One of the most creative poem bhayi.

Dogdom
22-Jul-2013 23:17 PM

First of all,I request you to appear before your readers at least once a month,
as Kailash Budhwar,the chief editor of BBC Hindi radio service,addressed his
audience once a week.It makes your relations & feelings so nice that I can't describe it in words.Superb lines ! And Superb concept ! That can give us
only the person who is like yours.As far as the word "Om" is concerned,it is
motive force of whole universe existence & it's peace,it's harmony.As a'Guru'
or a teacher,you have chanted this mantra "Om" in the ears of your readers
so beautifully that it will surely produce a very nice result.Thank you ,Sir.As I
think,you are masterpiece of wisdom,as well as modernity & spirituality both.
Can I say it "Triveni Sangam"? I salute your hard labour, persistence & genius
.God bless you for your long and healthy life.Expect so many more poems as "Om".It will be kind of you ,Sir.A lot of thanks again .With great regards.

Nathmal Sharma
22-Jul-2013 13:54 PM

Sum mum bonum of life.

Beautiful. Wholesome.

pck

p c katoch
22-Jul-2013 08:44 AM

yes you are quite right

oskar
22-Jul-2013 06:36 AM

Om
The Only Verse
Manifesting eternally
The Universe

BRILLIANT!!

Short and power packed. One of your best. Thanks for sharing.

Ramendra Kumar

Ramendra Kumar
22-Jul-2013 06:13 AM

Beautiful, Rajendra ji. Short and deep.

Julia

Julia Dutta
22-Jul-2013 06:01 AM

i loved "the sound of silence"

kusum
22-Jul-2013 04:31 AM

Most powerful invocation,sir!Thanks for sharing.Regards.

Sony Dalia
22-Jul-2013 03:00 AM

Lovely composition. If 'dhai' (two and half) letters have kept man together, just one letter OM has kept the Cosmos together. Thank you for your great poem, Rajender ji.

Kumarendra Mallick
22-Jul-2013 00:34 AM

Terse but packed with energy!

Pavalamani Pragasam
21-Jul-2013 23:37 PM

So much packed in Om - a sound of silence! Lovely! Thanks for sharing Rajenderji.

Padmaja Iyengar
21-Jul-2013 23:00 PM

The poem is a a hieroglyph which can be decoded to communicate the quintessence of creation. yes, in India we do not know much about materialism, but since days immemorial , the religious concepts of the Hindus have remained enigmatic. The poem so beautifully conveys the piety and in such a precise way.. In a word , Outstanding ..'R.K knows how to tell the maximum with minimum words.

Dr.Ratan Bhattacharjee
21-Jul-2013 22:04 PM

Wonderful , very abstract concentration ." The Dinamic rested in the Potential" love it. Good AUM

Pili Pubul
21-Jul-2013 20:22 PM

Beautiful sharing Rajender ji, keep up the great work!

In the kernal of Creation
In the tattwa of Akasha
Creative energy found home
Wise ancients called it AUM

The Dynamic rested in the Potential
Ever ready to be released in a flash
As the kernal expands in the Creation,
and Universe joins in the japa of the Choral!

Rohiniranjan

rohiniranjan
21-Jul-2013 19:42 PM

The sound of your silent energy reached my soul in verse expanding gently throughout the Uni- Verse. Namaste.

Pili Pubul
21-Jul-2013 17:31 PM