Emptiness

by Padmaja Iyengar-Paddy

eyes fixed and staring
heart bereft of emotions
mind blank yet restless

16-Aug-2013

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Comments on this Poem

Padmaja Ji,We are feeling emptiness without your poetry.When will you post your next poetry on site?
Thanks in advance.

Nathmal Sharma
15-Feb-2015 18:39 PM

Thanks for liking this one Seshuji. Appreciation of my senryu from a poet of your stature means a great deal to me.

Padmaja Iyengar
17-Aug-2013 09:20 AM

Eyes, heart and mind in each line I see.They are wonderful metaphorical organs too. They have a lot say and do even while at rest. To stop thinking, in fact, needs a greater effort. :) Wonderful insight you gave in your senryu. Kudos, Pamaja ji.

Seshu Chamarty
17-Aug-2013 04:04 AM

Thanks bhaskarji, kingshuk and Rupradha.

Padmaja Iyengar
16-Aug-2013 17:10 PM

mind blowing

Rupradha
16-Aug-2013 14:30 PM

Great!

kingshuk
16-Aug-2013 10:21 AM

excellent!!!

bhaskaranandjhabhaskar
16-Aug-2013 09:01 AM