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Nov 21, 2024

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Theme: Confession

Realisation

by Mohini Gurav

Realisation suddenly dawned upon me
With the rising sun
Making me understand my folly of expecting
You to be with me and be one.

Love is Serene , Divine and Unconditional
Mine is more platonic and so very exceptional
Your silences speak louder than words
I do understand them with all
efforts and concerns.

Hope you forgive me for my selfish acts
For not understanding the realities
And the genuine facts.
Let my platonic love for you flourish
Will be cherished in tranquility
Without any anguish.

18-Aug-2013

More By : Mohini Gurav

Views: 1532 Comments: 28

Comments on this Poem

Pradeep Nair Thanks .. You are right sometimes love can be possessive with serenity and divinity ..... being possessive is also one of the selfish acts and so realisation dawns ....

Mohini Gurav
17-Oct-2013 23:03 PM

Love is Serene , Divine and Unconditional---> Is it really so?
Then why there comes the possessiveness?
i have experienced possessiveness along with serenity and divinity of love.

Just a question.. that's all..

But the concluding stanza really stand out...
for it is magnificent.

there is food for brain in each of your work.

Pradeep S Nair
16-Oct-2013 14:53 PM

Thanks Padmaja ji for words of appreciation .

mohinigurav
05-Oct-2013 22:02 PM

Ah, love! What it can do to a person - well expressed! Great write, Mohiniji.

Padmaja Iyengar
03-Oct-2013 14:56 PM

Thanks Prabhat Yadav for heartfelt comments.

Mohini Gurav
08-Sep-2013 13:22 PM

While reading it, i got my surrounding as vaccum nd was hearing my heart-beat in a very obvious manner//great lines

Prabhat Yadav
08-Sep-2013 08:09 AM

Thanks Saheli dear for your comments and for understanding the feelings .

mohinigurav
28-Aug-2013 10:46 AM

wonderfully wrapped with sensi
itve emotions

saheli kar
28-Aug-2013 09:50 AM

Thanks Raju Mote sir for your compliments.

Mohini Gurav
24-Aug-2013 06:37 AM

Best lines really good.....

Raju Mote
24-Aug-2013 01:57 AM

Thanks Sachin for your compliments.

Mohini Gurav
23-Aug-2013 04:35 AM

Really good. Simple and appealing...

Sachin
23-Aug-2013 01:42 AM

Thanks Shriranjan for your compliments.

Mohini Gurav
22-Aug-2013 10:09 AM

good one

Shriranjan
22-Aug-2013 06:36 AM

Thanks Dr Sayantan Gupta ji for your generous comments. Yes your comments have motivated me to write more . Thanks.

mohinigurav
22-Aug-2013 04:36 AM

A good poem. Keep them coming.

Sayantan Gupta
21-Aug-2013 23:08 PM

Thanks dear Mayurakshi for your compliments .Motivated to write more. Thank You.

mohinigurav
21-Aug-2013 05:48 AM

The poem has wordsworthian touch.nice mohini keep it up

Mayurakshi
20-Aug-2013 23:26 PM

Thanks JS for your compliments. Extremely elated.

mohinigurav
19-Aug-2013 05:13 AM

Thanks Pradnya shete Pawar and Mr Inamdar for your generous comments. Motivated to write more. Thanks.

mohinigurav
19-Aug-2013 05:04 AM

Thanks Dr Kanade and Dr Madhav Raul for making me feel elated. Your comments really inspire me to write more. Heartfelt Thank You.

mohinigurav
19-Aug-2013 05:00 AM

your poem is very interesting and very attractive and impressive... very good..

Inamdar
19-Aug-2013 02:44 AM

Best Lines Madam, Keep it up.

Dr Madhav Raul
19-Aug-2013 02:13 AM

Your words are fully loaded with feeling and emotion.

Dr S S kanade
18-Aug-2013 13:31 PM

Best lines.. made my evening so good..

Pradnya Shete Pawar
18-Aug-2013 12:48 PM

Its elegant cadence is amazingly attractive! Keep it up!

JS
18-Aug-2013 10:38 AM

Thanks Rupradha for your encouraging and motivating comments.LOL.

mohinigurav
18-Aug-2013 10:14 AM

fantastic..

Rupradha
18-Aug-2013 09:15 AM