Come Unburden Your Mind

by Prof. Swanti Sharma



Come unburden your mind And write few lines. Let the pang leave altogether No matter if sobs accompanied. A new born when takes its flight Or a penguin when jumps down from some height Gathers up courage to do or die. Come and unburden your mind! Between the sighs, O hear! Hear your mind the breath so damp and the wet eyes. Even the silence silences the stormy inside Like a vast ocean plays a mother to the roaring rivulets. Oh! Come and unburden your mind. Pen down your grief and breathe afresh till the inkpot of your mind is emptied!

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25-Sep-2013

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Comments on this Poem

A qualitative change one feels inside after penning down one's griefs and all that teases inside or something that needs to be shared, and of course who is more patient than paper. I like this poem for its soothing appeal and a soulful suggestion. I think I breathe afresh too as I pen down my soul in poems.
v good!
regards,
Shahzia

literati
14-Oct-2013 01:02 AM

Excellent poem with very wise message. " pen down your grief and be
afresh". Wonderful .

pilipubul
07-Oct-2013 09:54 AM