No, Not Now

by Pili Pubul



No, don't come near not now. I feel your presence among shadows of dormant souls over opals and roses. Can hear crickets' songs void of rhythms floating lost on leafless trees. Oceans disappear abandoning thirsty sands. Silent planets eternally dancing are so close now. Deep darkness of the night overwhelms me. Dawn arrives kissing my lips, blanket of warm sun covers this painful body, giving it life. Another hour, another day.

Image © Pili Pubul

03-Oct-2013

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Comments on this Poem

Thank you so much Rupradah.

pilipubul
07-Oct-2013 20:43 PM

mind blowing!

Rupradha
07-Oct-2013 12:44 PM

Dear Nathmal, I am grateful for your caring comments and suggestions . Smiles ;--)

pilipubul
05-Oct-2013 07:44 AM

In India,We give suggestions without demanding them by anyone about anything.So,if you felt otherwise on my comment with suggestions, Please
excuse me.

Nathmal Sharma
05-Oct-2013 00:13 AM

Thank you from my heart Nathmal for your powerful ,caring and meaningful comment.. Pili.

Thank you so very much Padmaja, awesome comment.

pilipubul
04-Oct-2013 07:18 AM

Superb word play depicting myriad moods through the metaphors of darkness and light. Great visual...Well done Pili Pubul

Padmaja Iyengar
03-Oct-2013 23:33 PM

As I believe,You have run away the shadow of darkness by strong desire of living because you are a brave & courageous lady of strong determination.Dawn has arrived
at your door with hope and its golden rays. The Sun has brought a warm blanket of love for you.It is all due to blessing of God, as you have complete
faith in Him.Don't allow the thoughts of despair.All will be well.Always smile
and do yoga in the morning & evening both.Take medicines and juice of growing wheat regularly. It will help to make new blood in your body.Be positive, as you have to do many work of Him.God always bless you,dear smart young lady.Heartiest thanks for above nice writing.Thank you very much.

Nathmal Sharma
03-Oct-2013 22:52 PM

My gratitude Raj for a very meaningful comment .

Thank you so much Amitabh , glad you enjoy it.

pilipubul
03-Oct-2013 16:19 PM

nuances of a wordsmith, enjoyed it

Amitabh Mitra
03-Oct-2013 15:00 PM

"Another hour, another day".... a great way to express one's thanksgiving and gratitude for the warmth and light of the harbinger of life ... the cause, the origin and eventually where dissolution goes to take rest.

Raj
03-Oct-2013 14:30 PM