Lassitude

by Dr. Jaipal Singh

Nearing twilight --
Lassitude takes over
My body and soul.

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Comments on this Poem

Welcome :-)

alwaysaparna
13-Jan-2014 11:18 AM

Thank you so much, Rupradhaji and Padmajaji.

Thanks a lot, Aparnaji, for such a nice imagery for this senryu.

jairathore
09-Jan-2014 10:00 AM

Much liked this multi-layered senryu.

Padmaja Iyengar
09-Jan-2014 04:56 AM

nice..

Rupradha
08-Jan-2014 11:35 AM