You

by Kulbir Bhalla

You steal my resolve:
You melt my resistance;
Let's bridge our distance
So differences dissolve.

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Comments on this Poem

Nathmalji,

What you write is so true. My gratitude for your appreciation.

Kulbir
24-Feb-2014 12:58 PM

Those dissolve differences,are good couples.A lot of thanks.

Nathmal Sharma MertaCity
24-Feb-2014 11:16 AM

Aparnaji, Padmaja, Rupradhaj, Jai Sahib & Mohiniji,

My gratitudue for your appreciation.

Kulbir
20-Feb-2014 15:43 PM

lovely quatrain rhyme...loved this line ...You melt my resistance...passionately eager to dissolve differences....nice poem.

Mohini Gurav
17-Feb-2014 06:52 AM

nice quatrain nice rhyme..

jairathore
17-Feb-2014 05:09 AM

excellent..

Rupradha
17-Feb-2014 02:54 AM

Excellent Quatrains that are succinct !

Padmaja Iyengar
14-Feb-2014 13:15 PM