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Theme: Thirst

Thirst
by Neelam Sangwai
melted iron red hot,
absorbs water gets new shape
Thirst within without

22-May-2014

More By  :  Neelam Sangwai
Views: 1515     Comments: 3
Comments on this Poem

Comment Terse and nice.

Madhavi
28-May-2014 10:17 AM
Comment thirst within and out
to new-found shape...
doused red-hot iron

Liked your philosophy nicely rendered, Neelam.

seshu
23-May-2014 06:10 AM
Comment nice..

Rupradha
23-May-2014 02:17 AM

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