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Theme: Agony

Punishment
by Rupradha Mookerjee
Life without you:
A punishment!
It’s tragic,
No magic,
No hues,
No clues,
No gladness,
No madness,
No peace,
No kiss,
No prayer,
No air,
No winning,
No meaning!

26-May-2014

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Views: 1503     Comments: 20
Comments on this Poem

Comment thanks a lot Nathmal ji..

rupradhamookerjee
13-Jul-2014 09:44 AM
Comment Life has no meaning without love.It is punishment.In above lines you created it in a realistic way.That is appreciable. Less words,more emotions.A lot of thanks Rupradha Ji.

Nathmal Sharma
07-Jun-2014 10:32 AM
Comment thanks for your great comment Bhaskar ji..

Rupradha
07-Jun-2014 09:36 AM
Comment vivid hues of love and life so beautifully reflected...a fantastic visual wordplay..!!

Bhaskar Jha
05-Jun-2014 05:23 AM
Comment thank you so much Madhavi ji..

rupradhamookerjee
02-Jun-2014 13:23 PM
Comment What a fantastic tapestry! Thank you Ms Rupa for this one.

madhavi-godavarthy
02-Jun-2014 10:12 AM
Comment thanks a lot Rudra dear..

rupradhamookerjee
01-Jun-2014 12:38 PM
Comment Simply outstanding..........

Rudra
31-May-2014 11:50 AM
Comment thank you so much Paddy

rupradhamookerjee
30-May-2014 12:04 PM
Comment lol..thanks a lot Kumar ji

rupradhamookerjee
30-May-2014 12:00 PM
Comment Intense! Anguish and pathos of parting and separation superbly captured!

Padmaja Iyengar
30-May-2014 08:06 AM
Comment Rupa, you make me laugh and cry, naughty girl!

Kumarendra Mallick
29-May-2014 23:49 PM
Comment thanks a bunch Amita Amin ji!

rupradhamookerjee
29-May-2014 11:27 AM
Comment Thanks a lot Kumd Sir.

rupradhamookerjee
29-May-2014 11:26 AM
Comment Such intensity of feelings lovely

AA
29-May-2014 06:43 AM
Comment Beautiful!

TagoreBlog
29-May-2014 05:48 AM
Comment thank you so much Prof!!

rupradhamookerjee
28-May-2014 13:27 PM
Comment so sweet of you Kulbir ji..thanks a lot..

rupradhamookerjee
28-May-2014 13:26 PM
Comment Wow , So nice knit of words

truth seeker
28-May-2014 13:14 PM
Comment Rupradhaji,

I agree!

Without you,
What will I do?

Kulbir
28-May-2014 07:41 AM

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