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What a nice and heartfelt lines these are ! Poured from an innocent heart in praise of Chandani as well as your beloved.If someone asks me,Where does
true poetry live? I will surely say,"It resides in Mr.
Bijay Kant Dubey's heart, mind,thoughts and every particle of his body.He is a great poet in true sense. I liked all the lines very much.Thank you.God
bless you.
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You Called Me and Came I Hearing Your Call
You called me and came I hearing
You,
Putting my heart and soul at risk,
Placing it
Over the palm.
You called me and came I hearing
You,
Putting myself at risk,
Braving the odds,
You called and came I not,
How can it be?
O, My Chandni!
O, my Chandni,
Chandni, Chandni!
In such a colourful scenery,
Saw I you,
Came you into the heart of mine,
set you
And started I searching
Your sweet and smiling face,
Chandni,
O, my Chandni,
In this fair weather view,
How to sing of you!
A girl young and beautiful,
Lovely and photo-like,
Wide-eyed,
Beautiful and lovely enough!
In the moon-lit nights,
Often see you
Coming as a sweet dream,
Strolling the river bank,
A rajanigandha-like beloved
Glistening under the sparkling
Milky white moonlight,
O my Chandni, Moonlight,
O my love-lyric,
For you see I the fair white moon,
For you the white jasmines!
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Sir,You are a nice poet heart person who compose poem after poem.It is a God your gifted genius which
rarely seen.I salute your genius.God bless you.
Thank you very much.Please Hear your heart and
write more and more poetry.For,it is said that poetry
should be"swant sukhay, bahujan hitahy".A lot of
thanks for positive and healthy reacting.
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Under The Moonlit Nights
Under the moonlit nights,
Confuse I
In contrasting
My ladylove and the moon.
Sometimes take I her
As for my love,
A girl just like her
Have I dreamt for me.
A moon-faced beloved
See I
Blooming
As a white chrysanthemum.
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Good moonshining. Waiting of someone is apt in this lovely atmosphere. Thank you Sir.Both lines
and picture are very nice.I liked it.
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