Dying For You!

by Kulbir Bhalla

Our eyes contacted,
And sparks flew;
I was impacted:
I'm dying for you!

18-Jun-2014

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Comments on this Poem

mind blowing!

Rupradha
20-Jun-2014 01:44 AM

Padmaja and Nathmalji,

I am glad you liked it - I was wondering whether to submit it or not.

kulbirbhalla
19-Jun-2014 11:12 AM

It shows your "Deewanapan" (insanity) of love.All the persons like me,can't write love poems well.Only and only man as you,may write and express their views
so successfully and with boldness that we always amaze to read these beautiful pieces of poetry.Tons
of thanks Kulbir Ji.

Nathmal Sharma MertaCity
19-Jun-2014 10:37 AM

Wow! What a love ignition! Good one, Kulbir!

Padmaja Iyengar
19-Jun-2014 08:28 AM