The Moon And You

by Kulbir Bhalla

The moon has a face
Which billions look up to,
But it loses the race
When it faces you.

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Comments on this Poem

Jai Sahib, Nathmalji and Rupradhaji,

My gratitude to you all for your appreciation.

Kulbir
26-Sep-2014 13:18 PM

wow..mind blowing..

rupradhamookerjee
26-Sep-2014 11:35 AM

Good one.I liked both words and picture.Thank you.

Nathmal Sharma
24-Sep-2014 13:31 PM

Great! Very imaginative, indeed.

jairathore
22-Sep-2014 10:06 AM