Stone

by Rupradha Mookerjee

Every day her moist eyes look at her cell phone,

They wait for his one call, to hear his voice once,

But seems like he is not giving her any chance,

Feels like his heart is now made of stone!

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Comments on this Poem

"Koshish karne walon ki har nahin hoti." Shayad vah pathardil kisi din pighal jaye.Thanks immensely.

Nathmal Sharma
28-Dec-2014 22:59 PM

thank you so much Mohini ji, I love your optimistic approach!

Rupradha
06-Dec-2014 23:45 PM

Heartfelt !! Can feel the Pain through your words !! Pining is always painful !! Be optimistic !!

Mohini Gurav
06-Dec-2014 10:28 AM

what a beautiful optimistic approach you have towards life Kumar ji..I totally appreciate it!! Thank you so much!!

rupradhamookerjee
06-Dec-2014 02:05 AM

No, Rupa. The tears will not go waste. These will tear apart his heart and he shall long for you!

Kumarendra Mallick
05-Dec-2014 12:16 PM

thanks a lot Jai ji..

rupradhamookerjee
05-Dec-2014 10:33 AM

Pain well expressed!

jaipalsingh
05-Dec-2014 07:04 AM

thank you so much Kulbir ji!!

rupradhamookerjee
05-Dec-2014 00:49 AM

Rupradhaji,

A touching verse!

Kulbir
04-Dec-2014 14:27 PM

thank you so much Aparna Mam for liking my poem and giving this awesome pic for it! :)

rupradhamookerjee
04-Dec-2014 14:14 PM