Winter Love

by Seshu Chamarty

winter love...
the gap between us shrinks
by a few inches

10-Jan-2015

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Comments on this Poem

Nice one ...

Mohini Gurav
12-Jan-2015 09:39 AM

For senryu purposes, Mallick, I tried emotional content for Line 1 and spatial reference for Line 2 and Line 3 in the haiku/senryu. In the one you suggested both convey love. Thanks for your valued critical appreciation.

versetile
10-Jan-2015 09:51 AM

My take is
.
winter love --
we come closer
and closer

Kumarendra Mallick
10-Jan-2015 08:39 AM