You Aren't Far

by Kulbir Bhalla

My thoughts are
Holding you
So close to me
That I can see
It's really true -
You aren't far.

03-Mar-2015

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Comments on this Poem

Sometimes words are missed from my mobile set while typing & feeding.But where do they go? I don''t know.Sorry for missing word 'percentage' after hundred.

Nathmal Sharma
16-Mar-2015 22:37 PM

Rupradhaji & Nathmalji,

My gratitude for your appreciation.

Nathmalji, I agree with your comments 100%.

kulbirbhalla
16-Mar-2015 09:50 AM

We are near due to our thoughts.So too much distance is not a distance between lovers.Our
thoughts travel beyond the seven oceans and
say the views of hearts to another.Even though
they go beyond the span of sky.So I hundred agree with you that "You aren't far." Well written
Kulbir Ji.

Nathmal Sharma
16-Mar-2015 07:34 AM

beautiful..

Rupradha
08-Mar-2015 07:12 AM