She

by Bhaskaranand Jha Bhaskar

She is succor sweet
Resolved
Dissolved
In the water of my life

She is pure water
Chosen
Frozen
As Love in my heart

She is a fresh air
The breath
The oxygen
I do inhale to exist in

She is a great thought
Draped
Well-shaped
Out of my jumbled words

She is my deep insight
Attained
Awakened
Into the transcendental truth.

08-Mar-2015

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Beautiful one.

Pravat Kumar Padhy
08-Mar-2016 09:19 AM

"It seems that the poet is successful, achieving the rhetoric beauty of Climax by the proper use of ascending ideas like- Succor sweet, pure water, fresh air, exist in, great thought, deep insight and transcendental truth. SHE may be a type of divine inspiration that leads the poet to sublimity. Just As Wordsworth' SHE is"gleamed upon my sight/ A lovely apparition sent / to be a moment's ornament X X X as yet a spirit still and bright/ with something of angelic light. Superb writ..!"

- Originally remarked by Durga Patva,a Research Scholar from UP

bhaskaranandjhabhaskar
12-Mar-2015 11:01 AM

:-) welcome :-)

alwaysaparna
11-Mar-2015 15:16 PM

Thanks Aparna Di for the befitting image !

Thanks so muchfor your appreciation , Rupradha ji ! :)

bhaskaranandjhabhaskar
09-Mar-2015 12:53 PM

excellent!

Rupradha
08-Mar-2015 14:50 PM