Love Then & Now

by Dr. Jaipal Singh

The love then was
A rivulet of rainy season
Honest and real
Turbulent and eager
To break any barrier
Yet directionless and inane.

The love now is
An ocean of all seasons
Calm and serene
Ethereal and sublime
Capable to absorb and endure
Any tsunami or hurricane.

18-Jul-2015

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Comments on this Poem

Thank you, Rupradhaji, and nice to hear you after long.

jairathore
23-Jul-2015 10:56 AM

excellent Jai ji..absolutely loved it..

Rupradha
23-Jul-2015 02:55 AM

I am indeed grateful for your appreciation and kind words, Rama Raoji.

jairathore
21-Jul-2015 01:08 AM

intense sensitivity and coupled with it - brevity - this is captivating poetry
long live poetic sensibility
rama rao

ramji
19-Jul-2015 19:47 PM

Perhaps a natural process for some, thank you, Rama Raoji.

jairathore
19-Jul-2015 09:03 AM

Thank a lot, Kulbirji.

jairathore
19-Jul-2015 09:00 AM

Fruition - This is devoutly to be wished Jaipalji
Long Live LOVE
rama rao

V.V.B. Rama Rao
18-Jul-2015 19:28 PM

Jaipal Sahib,

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on love.

Kulbir
18-Jul-2015 14:28 PM