Theme: Creation

Naissance

 
Listening
in silence,
the vibe rising,
echoes footsteps
of a giant oak,
 
directing focus on
a nascent sapling,
emerging calmly
yet resolutely,
from the soiled rocks
 
The glistening dew
moistens warmly
the ecstatic eyes of
an aging grandpa
on a morning stroll
 

20-Aug-2020

More By  :  Rajender Krishan

Views: 1602     Comments: 6

Comments on this Poem

Comment You just paint with words. Superb lines.

V.K. Joshi
31-Aug-2020 05:27 AM

Comment Nature blossoms in the most unusual and serene ways, inspiring creativity in the poet's heart.

ANEETA CHAKRABARTY
28-Aug-2020 12:44 PM

Comment Youthful, poetic aging grandpa!!!Autobiographical?

Pavalamani Pragasam
24-Aug-2020 11:00 AM

Comment Gentle,soothing.

T.S.Chandra Mouli
21-Aug-2020 04:42 AM

Comment Freshness of morning creativity to be sustained by dew pure is beautiful to witness through your nice poem!

T A Ramesh
21-Aug-2020 00:29 AM

Comment Blossoms! This was the name given to pre-nursery toddlers. This very sentimental poem, took me in thoughts to that timeline in life. Why just an aging grandpa, even Pa is equally ecstatic to witness these tender moments. Great!

Sanjay Chowdhary
20-Aug-2020 16:02 PM


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