Seventy

by Rajender Krishan

Today, at Seventy
recounting experiences plenty
emotions, reasons
celebrated seasons

Wandering here,
there … everywhere
exploring areas
dark and light

Seldom feebly
often persuasively
suffering losses
enjoying gains

In all the grind
life has been kind
bequeathing some pain
with bagful of gains

Next steps
though fragile
preciously tread
the bonus years

27-Oct-2021

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Comments on this Poem

Precise expression
Recounted with passion The journey of life
Till now and beyond.

A Seer can see the right direction
Tread, guide and advance.

Congratulations for writing such a wonderful and appealing poem !!

Neera Pradhan
04-Nov-2021 06:10 AM

Very well written with true and choicest words RKji! Really poignant!

G Swaminathan
02-Nov-2021 09:45 AM

Thank you Kulbir ji, Arun Chopra ji

RK
28-Oct-2021 17:40 PM

51 words
Full of
Gratitude
And
Happiness .
So accurately
Strung in
The Japmala
Of life.
Short
And sweet
summary
Of
Life of
A MODERN YOGI.

.....SO refreshing.

Arun Chopra
28-Oct-2021 11:16 AM

Congratulations, and wishing you many, more birthdays to come!

Kulbir Bhalla
28-Oct-2021 09:25 AM