Early Battle

by Kenaz Chand

Nearing victory,

just as I was about

to step out of bed,

I heard the sweetest

melody.

An entire verse,
an innate voice,
existence
of a little olive bird.

So gentle,
that my mind gave up
its harshness,
and went back to sleep.

07-Apr-2023

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Comments on this Poem

Lovely short poem! Taking us close to the nature.

Dipti Maini
15-Apr-2023 21:24 PM

The morning tweetings of the bird are a wake up call while to others they are silky , soothing lullabies to make them sleep. What a wonder!
Lovely little poem!

Neera pradhan
12-Apr-2023 05:15 AM

The morning tweeting of the bird is a wake up call to some and to others it lulls to sleep. What a wonder!
Lovely poem!

Neera pradhan
12-Apr-2023 05:09 AM

Beautiful!

Melroy Valdeiro
11-Apr-2023 12:54 PM

Simple,gentle n beautiful n calming.Absorbing oneself in nature is when u discover things that we don't get time to look n ponder upon.

Anjlee stephen
11-Apr-2023 02:44 AM

Stupéfiant !

Satish Bendigiri.
10-Apr-2023 23:37 PM

It so resonates with me!

Prof. Shubha Tiwari
10-Apr-2023 23:13 PM

Good thoughts excellent wording awesome poem.Keep it moving bro.

Reuel Daniel Solomon
10-Apr-2023 22:48 PM

A clear message ...superb

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P C K PREM
10-Apr-2023 22:32 PM

We have forgotten to take notice of nature due to our busy lives but it still exists, calming the ones who still acknowledge it. Well written piece, Jazer.

Jasper
10-Apr-2023 22:04 PM

Simple, but deeply profound. Love it.

RK
10-Apr-2023 18:33 PM