Theme: Depression

The Hole

Tumbling down the hole
Wondering how far down I will go.
Down the hole I will go again
If my existence didn't revolve around sin...
Might I be able to win?

Hello hole,
You have stolen my soul.
I still have my loyalty,
But I am not of royalty.
Down the hole I will go again...
The same place I have always been
You say I am not the winner.
You are the judge,
and I am the sinner.

Hello hole,
You have consumed my goals.
The hole eats me alive
Down the hole I dive
The hole has consumed my sanity.
It has made me a living profanity.
Down the hole I go again...
The same place I have always been
You all go and achieve a goal.
I will stay here
Down in the hole.
The Hole.jpg

03-Sep-2006

More By  :  Joshua Tune

Views: 1502     Comments: 4

Comments on this Poem

Comment you can see another poem I wrote at


http://www.theartisticmuse.com/poehemians-submitted-poetry.html


I'ts called In This Moment Of Clarity

Joshua Tune
11-Oct-2012 01:28 AM

Comment OMG THAT WAS AWESOME!!!

BrattylilAngel51
11-Oct-2012 01:04 AM

Comment nice one joshhhhh :D

JJ40593
01-Oct-2012 06:38 AM

Comment I wrote this years ago when I was fifteen. It was actually the first poem I had ever written, it kinda saddens me that no one has ever commented on it....but oh well being an artist kinda sucks sometimes.






Joshua Tune
07-Sep-2012 02:09 AM


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