Between 2 Poets

by Priyanka Bhowmick

Past the seminar.

Says one poet to the other,

“What makes you write so profound?

wonder how your poems astound,

Dear brother!?”

Responses the poet second,

“I write in meditation

when positive energies envelop

my feelings doth develop

I inscribe in supreme concentration.”

01-Apr-2011

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Comments on this Poem

Nice and interesting on the whole.

But with a little re-orientation of words it could be-

"One poet to the other
Tell me my dear brother
What makes you, pen profound
And make your words astound"

Response

"I write in meditation
In supreme concentation
When positive energies envelop
My feelings doth develop"

Ravinder Malhotra
04-Apr-2011 02:51 AM