Love

by Sparrow Tiger

My enthusiasm was a new born child,
When you took me in your arms,
It became an adult, when you kissed me,
And it got matured, when you made love to me...

19-Apr-2011

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Comments on this Poem

With due respect Mr Malhotra, to me poem is an expression, and expressions doesn't have any prescribed shape or color.

a sparrowtiger
22-Apr-2011 04:47 AM

I am at a loss for words to express my anguish ! How does all this qualify as a poem ?

Ravinder Malhotra
20-Apr-2011 23:46 PM