Romantic Haiku

by Jan Oscar Hansen

Your breath
Easy as a sleeping sea
Serenity

~*~

Your breathing
Whispering as a palm tree
Kissed by the breeze

~*~

As the sea caress
The mythical blue atoll
She smiles in her sleep

23-May-2011

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Comments on this Poem

thank you all

janoscarhansen
10-Nov-2012 13:58 PM

Just beautiful.

Seshu Chamarty
09-Nov-2012 09:57 AM

Your breath...
sets a storm
in my heart

Nice to read your haiku. Thanks.

Kumarendra Mallick
28-May-2011 06:13 AM

Poignant, especially the second one.

dipankardasgupta
23-May-2011 22:42 PM