Theme: Appearances

The World of Appearances

The world operates on appearances,
in life it is in the conceptual sphere
action is motivated, nuances
in perception cause the stealth of the tiger;
the butterfly’s dance brightness to declare.
 
Flowers are fashioned in all shapes and hues
an impulse to insect choice in reaction;
a snapping twig alerts prey to the ruse
galvanising it into instant action
conceptually programmed to the least fraction.
 
Through the power of his mind a man rules
the earth, identity all things defines,
and what distinguishes wise men from fools
is rightness, advanced over all designs
of concept, the sure path to life outlines.
 
Rightness is identity, in all things
manifest, but in man’s realisation
contested as to what is right that brings
variance in the conceptualisation
that determines the form of the creation.
 
It stands to reason there can only be
one rightness, the rest is appearances
that you and I would call reality
that science defines, but in fleeting glances
despairs of, and each religion romances.
 
But should it come down, declare itself in
our midst, our common conceptual grasp,
all things must be reconciled in our vision,
all variance cease, true judgment must pass,
and the earth lifted to conceptual heaven.

03-Dec-2011

More By  :  R. D. Ashby

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Comments on this Poem

Comment 4 December 2011
Dear Mr. Ashby
Your mention of 'religion' brings to mind Ramakrishna's words -
"People draw water from the pond with their pitcher. Some call it 'Jal' some 'Pani' and some 'water'. But all of them draw the same stuff."
Yours sincerely,
Rajat Das Gupta

Rajat Das Gupta
04-Dec-2011 07:46 AM

Comment Thanks for your comment. Now that you've juxtaposed the two extracts from the two poems, I think my use of the term 'rightness' as the basis of identity unlocks the riddle Tagore poses as a 'mystery sublime'. Though as to the variance in conceptualisation of that defined as rightness, this can only be attributed to contextual factors in each varying environment where human needs determine the variance in the nature of conceptualisation of rightness. The study of world religions, ancient and modern, shows each religion to be taiilored to the needs of people where they are, accounting for the great variety of religious forms revealing the conceptualisation of rightness for each, yet that in principle is the same. Rightness realisation is identity realisation is the basis of life.

rdashby
03-Dec-2011 19:50 PM

Comment 3 December 2011
TO: Mr. R.D. Ashby.
Dear Mr. Ashby,
You have raised the fundamental enigma in human perception in your following lines, inter alia -
Rightness is identity, in all things
manifest, but in man’s realisation
contested as to what is right that brings
variance in the conceptualisation
that determines the form of the creation.

It very much brings to my mind a Tagore’s poem, the beginning of which is –
The person whom you create
At your hands diversely ornate;
To me he is a stranger,
Neither befits my soul inner;
Stamped by your signature
My factitious replica stands at Creation’s border;
While God on His secret mission
Builds up forms beyond our vision –
On the shore of the sea of Time;
Behind is the flamboyant mystery sublime;
Where light and shade blend
To see this or that as one might mend
To harmonize one’s imagination,
Out of forms comprising shadow, void and illusion;
To weave one’s pattern of the familiar
On the canvas of the unknown there.
Maybe, you find some sense in this analogy.
Yours sincerely,
Rajat Das Gupta

Rajat Das Gupta
03-Dec-2011 08:56 AM


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